The first one I noticed is in the first paragraph. I’m unsure if it’s a mistake or an obscure word, but when googling the word “pacrossct” I got no related results.
Oh, it is obvious mistake, there should be just “pact”. I remember correcting it, but it looks like it was not saved or something. I corrected it once again and looks like this time it sticked. Thank you very much for bringing this to my attention.
Thanks!
Hope You had some fun with it ;)
Sadly sometimes there is this problem with Android. Try disable dark theme. If it not working, than as I wrote in description of the game “You can play downloadable version: https://www.mediafire.com/file/pj1ebcl1ke56cgs/Dominion_of_Darkness_1.993.html/file It works fine even when online version don’t - I don’t know why”. Sorry for an inconvenience.
Thanks for Your interest! I am using TWINE. If Uou like Interactive Fiction, you can check my other works: https://adeptusrpg.wordpress.com/category/english-text-based-game-interactive-fiction/
Thanks! If you play, please let me know about Your feelings.
Thank You very much! Can You write something more about “odd choice of words”? I am not native English Speaker and I am willing to improve my language.
Thank You very much! Hope You will like it at least a bit.
I am reading “Dread Wyrm”, third book in the Traitor Son Cycle by Miles Cameron. Plot and world are OK, but I have feeling they are written in clumsy style.
Thank You for Your interest! When You play, please let me know about Your feelings.