Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months ago

[OC][FB] Haiku; Rain in the Dark

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[OC][FB] Haiku; Rain in the Dark

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Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months ago

German Original

Regen im Dunkeln
das Laternenlicht schimmert
Sterne aus Wasser

English Translation

Rain in the dark
The lantern light shimmers
Stars made of water

A friend of mine was vacationing in Japan and she send me this image, complaining about the weather during her vacation. So I made up this Haiku and sent it back to cheer her up and not long after she sent me a photo where she was running through the warm rain, laughing and looking at all the city lights.

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“Sterne aus Wasser” is so pretty 😍 I love it.
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  Thank you ☺️
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Honestly, it fits the Haiku structure perfectly. No comment except, beautifully written.

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