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minus-squareTheRealLinga@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up9·2 months agoRead this to my wife, telling her it’sa poem. She likes the wordplay, and the metaphors. It made her feel uncertain, uneasy.
minus-squareHadriscus@jlai.lulinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up8·edit-22 months agoWait let me try the same edit she said it’s beautiful, she could feel the wind. We’re not native speakers, so not sure she understood every line. But still
Read this to my wife, telling her it’sa poem. She likes the wordplay, and the metaphors. It made her feel uncertain, uneasy.
Wait let me try the same
edit she said it’s beautiful, she could feel the wind. We’re not native speakers, so not sure she understood every line. But still